To My Forever Flame
by Poetic Rizz
Original poem "For My Husband" by Susan Loughlin
Poetry Now Version
Loving you is a boundless journey,
An infinite adventure that defies time.
It transcends all limits,
Even those I set for myself.
Your love is my safe haven,
A warmth that never fades.
In its eternal glow,
We find our way through every storm.
This bond is unmatched,
Two decades strong and counting,
But in our hearts, it’s forever young.
Deep and unwavering,
We’ll hold this love until the end of days.
— Poetic Rizz
Original Poem
Loving you has no end and no beginning
Loving you is everything
It is infinite in time
And limitless in magnitude
Beyond even my own comprehension
Your love brings me home
Enfolds me and warms me
In its eternal embrace
Endless and palpable
Beyond all life's storms
A connection like no other
Twenty years long
But timeless in our hearts
Deep and true
Til' death us do part
— Susan Loughlin