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The Moment I Saw Your Eyes

by Poetic Rizz

Original poem "When I First Looked Into Your Eyes" by Faith Mattke

Love

Poetry Now Version

The moment I saw your eyes,

the world fell silent,

and time itself paused.

In that stillness,

I discovered a universe—

a paradise that’s yours and mine.

— Poetic Rizz

Original Poem

When first I looked into your eyes

each breath became a thousand sighs.

My heart drummed out a thunder beat

I glowed with joy from head to feet.

The hand of love had touched my soul,

as the bell of destiny began to toll.

The tide of love began to rise,

the world was filled with summer skies.

My sodden clouds of cold and grey

glowed with gold, then wisped away.

A brilliant rainbow arched across,

as waves of love began to toss.

The air was filled with lovebird cries,

when I first looked into your eyes.

When I first looked into your eyes,

all time and space were paralyzed

And in that instant, I was shown

a universe I had never known.

I dwell there still, in Paradise,

when I look into your eyes.

Faith Mattke