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Realizations

by Poetic Rizz

Original poem "Thoughts..." by Ashley Peter Loasby

Love

Poetry Now Version

I thought I knew beauty,

I thought I grasped grace,

I thought I understood love,

Until your gaze met mine.

I thought my heart was steady,

I thought my strength was whole,

I thought I heard the wind sing,

Until your voice broke through.

I thought the rose held fragrance,

I thought the sky was clear,

I thought nature was a wonder,

Until you came into view.

I believed the sun had set,

And that I’d seen it all,

But it wasn’t until your light shone down that I truly saw.

My eyes were open wide,

But now I'm not so sure—

Maybe they were only half awake

Before they beheld you.

I'll cherish this spark we share,

Nurturing it like a flame—

For when the time is right to shine,

We’ll light up the night together.

— Poetic Rizz

Original Poem

I thought that I'd seen beauty

I thought I'd witnessed grace,

I thought that I'd known love

'Til I gazed upon your face.

I thought I'd felt my heart beat

I thought my knees were weak,

I thought I'd heard a songbird

Until I heard you speak.

I thought the rose was fragrant

I thought the sky was blue,

I thought nature wonderful

'Til I first laid eyes on you.

I thought the sun was shining

I thought I'd seen it all,

I thought that I was standing

Until you made me fall.

I thought my eyes were open

Yet now I'm not so sure,

I think that I may be in love

Like I've never loved before.

I'll hold on to these feelings

And keep them safe within,

Until the time they're needed

And true love can begin...

Ashley Peter Loasby