Love's Melody in the Breeze
by Poetic Rizz
Original poem "Whispers in the Wind" by Orania Hamilton
Poetry Now Version
Your whispers are soft echoes,
that stir the winds of harmony,
and in life’s grand symphony,
every note is pure rhapsody.
We walk our own paths,
collecting blooms along the way,
sharing the music of their scent.
We dwell between two winds—
I here under a pale moon,
you at the edge of somewhere bright.
When the wind rustles through trees,
I stop to listen and find your voice
carried gently through time.
You are the sound of warm rain,
the moonlight that filters through trees,
and in evening’s glow,
your brilliance lights up my world.
I hear the whispers of the wind,
see stars sparkling above,
but I carry your light in my pocket.
So let’s dance among these winds—
and let me love you just as I do.
— Poetic Rizz
Original Poem
Your whispers are gentle echoes
that sway ardent winds of harmony
and in the symphony of life
each word is wrapped in rhapsody.
We travel separate roads of life
gather flowers along the way and
share the music of their fragrance.
We exist between two winds,
I here under a pale moon
you, the other end of somewhere.
Sometimes when wind blows through trees
I pause to listen and in its passing
I hear the tenderness of your voice
that fills the spectrum of my soul.
You are the chime of warm rain,
the moon that glows through the trees
and within the luster of evening
your aura fills the scene.
I hear the whispers of the wind
see the stars shine in the sky,
but I hold the sunrise in my pocket.
Dance with me within the wind,
then just let me love you.
— Orania Hamilton